Hey there!I'm writing a novel for a contest on HoneyFeed but my page views drop like a rock after the first chapter. I'm new to writing and would love some advice/feedback from anyone who reads a lot of Isekai or has some insight to where I'm losing my audience.TL;DR why is my book bad?www.honeyfeed.fm/novels/25397
>>282236949>>>/lit/ and start with the Greeks
>>282237462I thought to post in /lit/ but figured since it's an anime themed book there would be more light novel readers here on /a/. Most of the posts I'm seeing on /lit/ are western
>"Full Metal Alchemist" creator Hiromu Arakawa NEW TV ANIME "Yomi no Tsugai - Daemons of the Shadow Realm" set to air in 2026>-New Cast Reveal Trailer->Release Date: 2026 >Animation Studio: Bones Filmhttps://youtu.be/Y5AtJer5rRo
>>282233434Excited for this one
>>282233434>Yuuichi NakamuraOf fucking course
>>282233794lol. I wonder how often this happens before a character is given official color. I know anons here sometimes imagine totally different color schemes for a char.
>>282233434Can't wait, also how it's the manga going? in terms of finishing it I mean
>>282237533Feels like it could end in about 15 chapters if Arakawa wanted it to, but it could also go for 50 instead.
IT'S NUKITASHI FRIDAY
>>282215590Why isn't it fully uncensored like anything else on Oceanveil? That's the entire appeal of their service.
>>282236140I don't really agree. The only one that got development was Nanase to set up her anime original kidnapping and that's fine. But I stick by my opinion that the rest of the cast has pretty much nothing going for them beyond the sentence or two they said about why they're outcasts in that very scene. >>282236233Yeah that too.
>>282230463Despite the crazy setting this is 100% a vanilla harem VN you won't find anything close to a bad end, rape or NTR involving the harem, the most you'll find is the NTR guillotine with a couple of randoms but even that it's just like 2-3 lines and then it cuts.
>>282236103citizen, i regret to inform you that it's the other way around.
Dont have anything else to watch. Guess im gonna Read Asane route.
>>282212421Still the closest anyone came to kill Reebok
>>282229788kek
>>282229788>King supportYou just know that those 50k is poisoned gift.
>>282231196Chinese folklore religion/paganism was the top dog religiously speaking
>>282232474>Probably because legalism ignores human natureLegalism doesn't ignore human nature it's first principle is based on a outlook of pessimism about human nature. The problem however is it assumes a culture where everyone revers the law.
CGI did huge damage to anime
>>282237136>CGI badthat's a myth pretentious weebs love to propagate. the anime industry was ALWAYS budget focused. embracing CGI is nothing special
>>282237333>>282237221BYE anime industry shills ! keep talking to yourselves. I left the threadBYE.
I HATE anime! That's why I constantly make threads on /a/ - Anime and Manga!! Anyone who likes anime is an industry shill schizo.
>>282237136>literally soulless How will they ever recover?
>pantyschizo ban evading again
Mamoru Hosoda’s isekai riff on Hamlet is one of this year’s biggest anime disappointments.>No Oscar nomination?
>I doubt Hosoda actually has the conviction that an extremely basic Hamlet deconstruction equals a solution to the problem of ALL WAR IN THE FUTUREwutOkay, definitely watching this movie now
>>282233872It’s badJapan probably hates it too
>>282232556Worse than KnY
>>282232556I'm enjoying Clevatess this season for Alicia so maybe I'll check this out, tooCan't have enough revenge fuelled battle girls!
>>282235813K
these two are PEAK
.... peak what?
>>282237493peak sexopeak wife material in a mormon 3some marriage
why did she do it?
>>282228898Needs more slow motion loops and a close-up of the strawberry being stolen.
Do the keions like system of a down?
She's a fan of Yotsubato.
>>282228898Some people just want to watch the world burn
>>282228898Mugi is evil
After careful analysis of Garupan, I've come to the conclusion that Momo's father deserves more, many things even
>>282237910Why are this many guppies into bugs
>>282237910I love reino
last post for sheska
last for hag sex
>>282237952Japanese thing, that's why pokemon is so popular.
This is the most disgustingly violent piece of media I ever consumed. I guarantee the illustrator was possessed by Satan.
>>282228287Proper.
>>282230824Manga goes full shonen retardation towards the end, it's really fun but you probably won't like it if you want to take it seriously
>>282227268Lmao, go read ichi the killer.
It was fucking amazing but i still prefer Shuuya from the book. He was cool
>>282235269Yup. Novel is better. It's a must read
>gulliver's travel summaryThis classic satire follows the travels of a surgeon and sea captain who embarks on a series of extraordinary voyages. The protagonist first finds himself shipwrecked on an island inhabited by tiny people, later discovers a land of giants, then encounters a society of intelligent horses, and finally lands on a floating island of scientists. huuuh beside the smart horses, it is just like in one piece. what do you think of it and who could the smart horses, minks?
>huge fan of the original manga/anime to the point of obsession>a unique manga all about badass moments, cool characters, and tense brutal sports>spent years praying for a sequel or remake that adapts the unanimated chapters>got this sequel shit instead>shameless pedobait coom slop with stupid art and LGBT characters everywherewhat happened to Japan? who asked for this?
>>282233743Middle girl is a lesbianLeft is a tranny>>282232396This one is gayThere's a tranny gym teacher in the MC's school too.Also, since all characters are girls, there are lots of yurism here
>>282234418>Middle girl is a lesbianThey're literally all lesbians Yuri is not your LGBT boogieman though>Left is a trannyMuscular girl, you obsessed ignoramus
>>282232749What HRT does to a nigga.
Difference between a manga made for little boys, and a manga made for smelly pedos
>>282231603>huge fanYou never read this. Not a single page.
>undisclosed amount of time before the final tournament>worms have imploded and have 3 dudes capable of fighting>tiger niko is busy changing Louhan's diaper (all according to his plan)>wu have imploded and nobody believes in gilbert >shen is busy drinking with jojiwho are the antagonists of this manga?
The antagonist is "you", the readerThe suffering would not continue if you did not exist
>>282228397The Antagonist is LouhanNot for any of his alledged but very real attrocities, but for the fact that he's actually trying to move the story forward.Truley villianous
>>282233332Huge off by onewho got >>282233333
>>282228632He's so me, I'm called Assad
>>282236191How's Russia Assad
>>282233727I wouldn't necessarily say "girlboss" but the amount of disinterest is incredibly offputting. The MC has to practically do flaming backflips of thoughtfullness and courtesy to even get her to consider him as a romantic interest. As soon as he burns out from his frankly superhuman levels of devotion that she's become accustomed to, she's gonna think that he doesn't care anymore and cause a problem.It wouldn't be so bad if this were a one heroine show where she's presented as the only choice, but there's another girl who likes him for all the right reasons and is actually present and forthright with her feelings.Now if the latest chapters are anything to go by the author is going to have to perfom THE character assasination plot of all times just to shoehorn her intended pairing through.
>>282234181>Now if the latest chapters are anything to go by the author is going to have to perfom THE character assasination plot of all times just to shoehorn her intended pairing through.oh can you elaborate? Only watched the anime but I'm interested.
>>282234203TLDR: looks like shes gonna have Hina "UNgiveup" right as Chinatsu graduates both crushing the guy she's been having some development with, and attempting to fully homewreck the Taiki Chinatsu train. All coming completely out of nowhere.It's gonna be a Burial better than anything Cena or HHH ever managed.
>>282234270i'd pick up the manga if that happened lmao but knowing this author, she'll only humiliate hina more which is sad
>>282233727>uninterestedShe's just a baka with barely enough room in her head for basketball.
The worst piece of media in history
>>282233624>We
>>282234215Lets be real: this and people taking those Otis jokes seriously was what most likely this.
>>282235862>...ACK!!
>>282236058Kek
>black individuals
